We have recieved feedback to this presentation of which included both positives and negatives of what can be included and changed in our storyline etc. This has really helped us to make changes and for us to create a successful teaser trailer to meet our audiences expectations. The positive feedback recieved included: - great storyline (detailed) goes with the horror/thriller genre - has mostly all aspects of horror/thriller conventions - organised with costume, props characters and location - synopsis is very good and seems scary and sums it up in a sentence - costumes give a insight of the characters - very detailed The negative feedback included: - very detailed storyline however seems a bit too complex. Our audience also added their opinions of this presentation in comparison to our old storyline of the film "Demented" and they had stated that we had made a good choice in creating a more simple yet scary storyline compared to the confusing one before, and that the idea of this trailer seemed more appealing and interesting.
Haunted Presentation
We have made a new presentation for our new teaser trailer. This presentation has been shown to our audience of which include ten females and ten males, therefore we have made sure to show our moodboard, storyline, synopsis, target audience, key questions, storyboard, character descriptions, location pictures and descriptions, and costume and props. This is because it gives more of an understanding to the audience of a sense of the teaser trailer. Also, the more put into the presentation allows us to recieve a wider range of positive and negative feedback in order to work on our project more and make any ammendments if needed.
